Some people say that modern innovation brings a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree ?
In the contemporary era, modern innovations is making drastic changes in myriads of people lives. Some developments are in the favor of human life and some are not. Which makes this conundrum topic mootable. This essay will enlightens the distinct views of various people.
It is irrefutable to say that, latest technology has made positive impacts on community in each and every field. Now, we are much dependent upon the technology than earlier, from waking up in the morning to sleeping at night we are using latest apps and gadgets to fulfil our daily needs and requirements, for instance, booking taxi, ordering meal, investing, online classes and many more becomes quite easy and less time consuming. Modern innovations has made us addictive and no one now can even imagine living without the technology that currently persist.
On the contrary, despite of plenty benefits, technology have some disadvantages. In the modern world, advanced innovations has made youth to addictive to its gadgets and applications causing them obesity and lethargic. An article published in a reputed research magazine of 'technology and world'in 2019 revealed astonishing results and states that today's youth prefer to stay home instead of playing outdoor sports and more active on social sites than making actual friends. which makes them more lonely and easy target of depression.
According to my observation, technology impacts everyone's life positively and certainly it has some negative points too. But if we use technology in an optimal manner then it can provide pleasant results, additionally we can think of many example under which advancement have shown fruitful results for example in medical field and in education sector.
To cut the long story short, we can not deny that technology become an indispensable part of many lives and if we utilise this in better way then we can witness staggering outcome in coming years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e favor of human life and some are not. Which makes this conundrum topic mootable. Th...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'enlighten'
Suggestion: enlighten
...nundrum topic mootable. This essay will enlightens the distinct views of various people. ...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...people. It is irrefutable to say that, latest technology has made positive impacts on...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
...the morning to sleeping at night we are using latest apps and gadgets to fulfil our daily ne...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...led astonishing results and states that todays youth prefer to stay home instead of pl...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ocial sites than making actual friends. which makes them more lonely and easy target ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an optimal manner" with adverb for "optimal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve points too. But if we use technology in an optimal manner then it can provide pleasant results, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25566343042 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75314197667 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62783171521 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3905327455 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120920481034 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046561816229 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397396911722 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649139896224 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047672551237 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.