Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree?
There are some people, who think that modern innovations are bringing more problems than the solutions in our lives but, I want to clear some clouds here. Innovation is a sward with both sides but it acts on its bearer’s will. So in the first place, it would be wrong to think that innovations are bringing problems. It’s us, who are holding this sward and waving it at anything that comes in our way. Sward can not do good or bad by itself; its just a tool. therefore, the use of modern innovation for the good or bad depends upon us.
Now, let’s see some history here. Do modern innovations are bringing more problem or we were like this always? In biblical narrative, Adam and Eve ate the fruit from the tree of the knowledge of good and evil and got exiled from Eden, we all have heard that story. What it really tells us is that this resistance to modern innovations is actually not that modern and, we are facing it from the very start of mankind as stated in the bible. Though, if we think deeply about what these modern innovations actually brought in our life; the only answer will be ‘skills to survive.’
Archaeologists have found many civilizations older than 10000 years before us which are all doomed or shifted somewhere due to natural disasters or continuous raging wars. We might be the largest civilization on Earth till now occupying every land we can. We already faced 2 World Wars and not only survived but flourished well after that. All because we have the most modern innovations in thousand years to survive through the Wars, through the plague, through the Earthquakes and tsunamis. With the help of modern innovations, we can always survive as mankind even if the conflicts of the human mind are inevitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... we have the most modern innovations in thousand years to survive through the Wars, thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, so, therefore, well, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52211294731 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4155269664 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213018131839 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791988466048 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935099790101 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150546241113 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735237931283 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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