You are planning a holiday to Austrelia. You have been given a name and adress of a hotel in the center of Sydney and would like more information.
Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities. Find out if hotel arranges a day trip and ask them to send you a broucher.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to enquire about the availability of the rooms with a sea faced windows in your hotel on the next saturday. Also let me know if the car parking is avilable or I haveto do my own provision. It would be also nice to know if you provide laundary or not because I will be needing that. If you don’t mind I will be needing a hot water shower in my room; I hope you can arrange that.
Do you facilitate restaurant there? and what will be timing for the breakfast? Since your hotel is located in the heart of the city, do you also arrange a day trip? Because I really want to get to know this city. If you don’t mind, It would be more convinient for me if you send me a hotel broucher.
If there is any more information about your hotel facilities you would like to share with me, please do. I will be waiting for your responce.
Yours Faithfully,
Rodger
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ows in your hotel on the next saturday. Also let me know if the car parking is avila...
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Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... provide laundary or not because I will be needing that. If you don’t mind I will be needi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... needing that. If you don’t mind I will be needing a hot water shower in my room; I hope y...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...t. Do you facilitate restaurant there? and what will be timing for the breakfast?...
^^^
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urant there? and what will be timing for the breakfast? Since your hotel is locat...
^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e city, do you also arrange a day trip? Because I really want to get to know this city....
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to get to know this city. If you don’t mind, It would be more convinient for me...
^^
Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our responce. Yours Faithfully, Rodger
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23529411765 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4124532733 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0819689055 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262374003652 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966320350745 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105767188552 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2134137682 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331426996841 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.