Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children’s time is better spent on academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is important to give physical education to children alongside the academic subjects whereas, some people think of it as a waste of time and children should be focused only on their textbooks since their career depends on it. I would like to discuss both views.
Some people believe physical education classes should be held for all school-age children because it builds good habit of staying fit. Physical strength is the undivided part of our life. Whether we choose sports as our career or not, good fitness is always necessary for long and healthy life. In schools, sports should be given equal value as study because playing in ground helps us to keep our mind fresh and keep up with studies. Some students are not bright in specific subjects For them, parents should start seeing sports as a career option. Many sportsmen also earn more than an average citizen. So, if guided properly, sports could be the better career option.
There was a time when textual studies were far more important than sports since they were offering good paying jobs in future. Because of that, many people often considered sports as a leisure activity and not as a career but nowadays, it is not that true.
We cannot deny, that the world always need more scholars as they are going to build the basic infrastructure of the society but, what help they could be if they are unfit themselves? On the contrary, it is found that, physical education in schools helps to focus more on textual study. So I think, we should agree about including physical education classes in the time-table for all children who learn in schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nce they were offering good paying jobs in future. Because of that, many people often con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80575539568 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35528844853 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1774402516 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270505204393 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911363047315 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108954222337 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165382360575 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940895489691 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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