One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney.
Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: Listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.
Dear John,
I got your letter and I am really happy to hear that you are planning to move to Sydney. I am glad that you choose to take my advice about how to improve your English efficiently since I am sort of an English teacher myself.
First of all, I’d like to advise you about improving your listening skills. For that, you can simply watch English movies that have a British accent used in them or just download free podcasts from the BBC. They are far more helpful in understanding the words and how native people use them while communicating than talking with local people.
The second important thing is nothing else but speaking. When you get used to listening to English words, start making sentences with them or you can just repeat verbally them after listening. With time you will learn to modify the original sentences and bend them to your will.
Now, you are not far For that, I’d recommend you to read books as much as possible for the start, choose poems then you can progress your reading to the literature of native philosophers; mark unknown words and google their meaning.
And that’s all! You are ready to go. My best wishes are with you.
Best luck
Richard
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| 2023-07-01 | Aivyne | 56 | view |
| 2020-07-14 | nands71191 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'sort of'.
Suggestion: sort of
...ove your English efficiently since I am sort of an English teacher myself. First of all,...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icating than talking with local people. The second important thing is nothing el...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, then, while, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63679245283 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27780376601 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3830145581 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9166666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118870715428 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489834932764 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609390837248 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070167711794 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664869367057 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.