Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The technology has improved in a way that with the use of internet people can watch movies on their phones. A significant number of individuals opine that the requirement of cinema theatre is nil as films can be enjoyed in the mobile phones. Whereas others believe for full entertainment and pleasure, we should go to cinema halls. In this essay, both the notions will be discussed followed by an opinion.
On the one side, watching pictures on mobile phones is the most convenient way and according to the viewer's need. The films can be seen at any location and during other activities, like while travelling. Moreover, the person can pause in between any time according to his needs or if any disturbance while watching. In addition to that, the majority of the films on the internet sites are free, which allows access to most of the individuals who have a limited budget.
On the other side, the cinema halls are made to create such an environment. Music systems, dim lights to make people feel out of their daily routine and helps the individual to feel refreshing and relaxed. The emotions are high to watch a movie in a theatre is more energetic and more enjoyable. Dedicated time for enjoyment in our daily life is equally important especially to those who are totally busy and disturbed in their professional life.
In conclusion, seeing films in the mobile phones is more comfortable and according to the needs, although watching pictures in the films makes a person more happy and relaxed, as people give dedicated time to such things in a different environment from their daily routine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86861313869 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68517913937 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3513101902 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255788393559 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838217315036 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577245170336 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145860389898 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714620812925 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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