Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
With the advent of pay-per-view entertainment platforms, there has been a shift in the way humans watch movies. And owing to these technological advancements, it is perceived by some that there is no need to go to theatres as one can easily see it at his/her place because of the ease in availability. In my opinion, though phones and other devices have paved a way to get that kind of entertainment at home because it helps in saving money, cinema halls are going to be there for the reason that the kind of experience they provide, cannot be compared to any other means and holds an important place.
Talking about the home based movie watching experience first, this type of method can play an instrumental role in saving money. With the influx of reasonable offers, one can easily get an access of up to a month with the same amount as of a movie ticket. To exemplify, Netflix recently came up with a mobile only offer in India which costs INR 199 only. Additionally, when people go out for a movie, they not only spend only movie tickets, but also on ultra expensive meals. Consequently, they can save a lot of money that can be used for some other important work.
Coming to the cinema hall, the kind of experience a person gets by spending time over here is beyond comparable. Movies are not meant only to spend time, but rather spend it as a leisure activity. Watching it at a theatre enables viewers to experience better sound quality with larger screen size, something that is not possible at home. It is also like a going out option to spend leisure time with friends and families and hangout with them. To illustrate, my family has a fix schedule of watching a movie every month at a local cinema hall. As a result, it helps to cope up with monotonous lifestyle and sometimes even teaches us how to behave or act socially. In addition, it helps in building better relationship between all members of the family and brings them closer.
To conclude, no one can deny that recent practices of enjoying movies via cell phones and laptops have posed a serious threat to multiplexes, but the cinema halls were made with the idea of a providing a unique experience, which as per me, will stay in every part of our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, in addition, kind of, talking about, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6125 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60603146566 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5475 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6076293977 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153031486655 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462025736357 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542123535939 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999135393818 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633207531072 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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