Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there
is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed,
films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although it is believed by some that due to the availability of movies on our communication devices, cinemas have become obsolete, while it is considered by others, that movies are best enjoyed in cinemas. In my opinion, I consider that watching movies in cinemas can never be matched by any other medium.
On the one hand, it is considered by some that it is going to be a norm to watch movies on cell phones, because of how convenient it is. Firstly, people can access latest movies anytime on their phones at a nominal price. In other words, they can stream any film they like, whether classics or blockbusters, from the comfort of their homes, therefore, they do not have to deal with problems such as traffic congestion. Secondly, watching films on phones is very convenient, because one can pause and replay, furthermore, the volume, contrast can be adjusted as per their preference.
On the other hand, some believe that the experience of watching a movie in a theater can not be replicated, and I agree. The whole ambiance of a movie theater, from watching it on a big screen making the characters appear larger than life, to being in a dark room with other movie watchers, is unmatched. Another point to consider, is that the cinema halls these days are equipped with the latest and cutting edge technology, especially the amazing sound effects, 3D and 4D effects make watching movies, particularly, sci-fi and action films, any film buffs dream. Also, it is a wholesome experience, enjoyed with friends and family, including sharing pop corn and food or jumping out of a seat at the appearance of a ghost making for some memorable and cherished moments.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, to truly appreciate the craft and performances of the people involved in movies, they have to be seen in a cinema, besides these moments make for some lifelong memories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'access the latest'.
Suggestion: access the latest
...w convenient it is. Firstly, people can access latest movies anytime on their phones at a nom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87066246057 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73743611956 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0843915905 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.363636364 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5454545455 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231368974056 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962692306613 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442704802206 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149280122725 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172682403012 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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