Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both the views and give our opinion.
Nowadays movies are the best source of entertainment. People prefer to spend sometime with their family and friend while watching them. However, its been widely believe that rather than going out to theaters, we can use our phones and tablets to see films. But some argued that cinema is the only way to fully enjoy the movies. In my opinion, I think I would prefer to watch it on big screen instead of tablet or phone.
To begin with, the predominant benefits of watching a movie in cinema is better sound quality and picture screen. To thoroughly enjoy a picture, both of this aspects are necessary. Big cineplex has high quality woofer and sound bar compare to the mobile phones and tablets small screen resolution and cheap hearing audio. Secondly, cinemas usually shows new movie that just came out recently. When a particular famous movie came out you can go there and can watch them immediately. you don't need to wait for DVD's to launch or to wait for its release on online platform to watch it from home.
On the other hand, watching pictures from home is way cheaper than going to theater. There is no need to pay to price of tickets or to buy any expensive refreshment from hall. In addition, on phones and tablet you can enjoy film in your living room on your bed, couch or anywhere you want, in place of sitting on recliner chair in cinema.
In conclusion, where you want to entertain yourself is all depend on individuals choice. Everyone think different but for me cinema always thrills me out while watching movies, it's the place where I can enjoy all the visuals, graphics and sound fully compare to sitting in front of my tv screen in my house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...watching them. However, its been widely believe that rather than going out to theaters,...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... To thoroughly enjoy a picture, both of this aspects are necessary. Big cineplex has...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...o there and can watch them immediately. you dont need to wait for DVDs to launch or...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ere and can watch them immediately. you dont need to wait for DVDs to launch or to w...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... depend on individuals choice. Everyone think different but for me cinema always thri...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s thrills me out while watching movies, its the place where I can enjoy all the vis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62626262626 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35563698596 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4300611396 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226513920905 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672221565213 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498608717566 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136447516536 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567551231825 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.