Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that the government is responsible for conserving the environment while some people believe that each person is accountable to preserve the nature. In my opinion, I believe that although the administration is liable to protect the natural habitat, each individual must assist the institution by supporting them in their mission.
One one hand, the administration must install strict rules in place for nature conservation. In other words, they should impose restrictions on activities such as banning single use plastic, polythene bags and other harmful items which have the potential to degrade our natural habitat. To illustrate, San Francisco Airport has recently banned the use of plastic water bottles and declared their airport plastic free.
On the other side, it is the people of the community who have to be educated and made aware of the dangerous habits which are polluting our living space. In other words, every person must follow and abide by the rules set by the authorities. Moreover, they should make a conscious effort to protect the nature as much as possible.
Finally, in my opinion, the government's efforts and individual's actions should go hand in hand. One would be incomplete without the other and both the efforts and actions need to be in sync for this mission to succeed.
To conclude, the government and the individuals have to come together for environment conservation. It is not the responsibility of one person, but everyone as a whole. Therefore, it becomes imperative that the citizens follow the rules and restrictions laid out by the authorities that would enable the preservation of Mother Earth.
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- Every country should have a free healthcare service, if this means the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter-• explaining the problems• suggesting ways to help the situation• prop 78
- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
... supporting them in their mission. One one hand, the administration must install s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95281503844 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0951530958 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23896879193 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817478471911 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654027611948 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130755325915 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638814608656 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.