Some people spend more time reading books, while others prefer to watch TV. The former group is more likely to develop creative imaginations and have a much better grasp of language skills. Do you agree or disagree
The Importance of reading has never been overlooked by any society. But with the advent of television, the popularity has become reduce immensely. While watching tv can have a few advantages, but it can never outweigh the benefits of reading books. In the upcoming paragraphs, I intend to discuss some points to support my opinion.
It is more effective than watching stuff on screen as Reading is an active activity. To fully understand a certain topics, Children have to give their full attention to the text, and also more than just understanding the Certain topic, children tend to imagine character whatever they read from the description. so, it enhances their imagination, and therefore, it aids in learning efficiently and deeply. Also, children master language development since they learn vocabulary and pronunciation. Apart from this, it also enhances their attention span and develops a habit to concentrate for a long time.
On other hand, television can make people more knowledgeable. When they watch tv, they can get a wealth of information about the world they are living in. There are a variety of channels which caters to individual according to their taste. however, spending time in front of the tv can be detrimental to their health because it may lead to shortsightedness. also, it may harm children’s imagination. It is scientifically proven that when they watch any program on television, their brain is hardly engaged in that. therefore, this passive method of information absorption may undermine the intellectual development of the mind in long run.
To sum up, it can be retreated that book reading largely advantageous as compare to another medium of learning as it does not have any negatives effects on child in any way and helps in excel in academically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14726027397 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07709433887 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8743582779 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185573100805 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535943699837 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469381050277 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100424833365 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268152323717 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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