Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born?
What might be the reasons for this
What are advantages and disadvantage?
It is believed by many that individuals prefer to live their life at place where they spend their childhood. The acute reason behind this that they do not want to leave their roots where they spend a large proportion of their lives. This essay shall put forth merits as well demerits of the above assertion in the subsequent paragraphs.
Since people are very emotional about their birth places, they are not ready to leave their home town or country. Moreover, if they have well settled business in their city, why they need to move to another metropolis or nation where they have to start from very beginning. Apart from this, it is beneficial to live with senior citizens as they can give appropriate guidance toward life and work. A survey conducted in India shown that 50% people spend their whole life at one place due to their love and affection for that place and people. Thus, more living close to family members, better gets the journey of life.
What could be the demerits of living at a birth place? Well, there are plethora of disadvantages. To commence with, individuals will not get exposer and they cannot broaden their horizon of knowledge. Besides, they can get fewer opportunities to acquire knowledge about other cultures and it might harm their business. Therefore, people should get out from their comfort level and explore the world.
In conclusion, although living close to places where people belongs are advantageous for people, they are definitely living a life with boundaries where they cannot explore new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'settled'.
Suggestion: settled
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...zon of knowledge. Besides, they can get less opportunities to acquire knowledge abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94615384615 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42117141192 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1076756458 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377485731943 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125316371385 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808652211336 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245190452936 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038154006571 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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