Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?
Two days ago, there was an article about the significance of books in modern world. The author suggested that they will become obsolete as a source of enlightenment and enjoyment. Thus essay will discuss both sides and agree with the writer of the article.
Let us start the reasons of why books will become less popular. The first cause is a growth in preference for playing video games. In contrast to books, computer games are more appealing, since they are abundant in variety as well as special effect, so many children spend most of their leisure in the digital world. As well as computer games, many students use to the internet to conduct research. Instead of sitting in the library to collect information, classmen tend to exploit the web, because it is faster and more convenient in usage. Moreover, many people often learn from online lessons. In Kazakstan, people often study, for instance, the english language on YouTube website, because they can watch native speakers and real dialogues, which books cannot offer.
However, internet users think that books will become things of the past. They justify their opinion with the fact that people rely more on books as an authentic source of information. Books undergo the verification process before they go to publication, while websites often contain either distorted or fake information. In addition, readers can always use books as entertainment. Electronic devices heavily depend both on electricity and internet connection; therefore, people cannot use them when they are away from civilization, whereas books are their complete opposite. Furthermore, books cause little damage to eyes. Unlike digital screens, books barely worsen human vision, which makes them more attractive for those with sight impairment.
In conclusion, even though some book supporters claim that books will always hold its significant, I think humans will gradually stop using paper sources as both data and amusement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33012820513 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62375913817 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1277877179 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3888888889 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172027721614 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532947574433 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420808545257 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108667761452 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044700787837 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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