Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial issue about abort in community. Some doctors suggest legalizing it in society, while some social workers criticize their idea. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of introducing abort legalization.
Let is start with the reasons why some doctors state that abortion should be legalized. The first reason is that it reduces the number of unwanted pregnancies. Many women get pregnant unexpectedly, so they should have the right to stop it before it ruins their plans. Another factor is that that it can prevent illnesses related to pregnancy. Many pregnancies may jeopardize the lives of both mother and fetal, if either has problems with health such as cancer and gene defects. Moreover, it may help eliminate illegal abortion. Many females address to uncertified doctors, when they need to hide the desire to end pregnancy, which often results in either health implications or death.
However, some social workers are opposed to legislation of abortion. They justify their viewpoint with the following arguments. Firstly, abortion on late stages of pregnancy is equal to murder. On the last phases of fetus development, it already has a consciousness, so when women make an abortion, they actually kill a human being, which requires the correspondent punishment. Secondly, it contradicts religious beliefs. Many communities have no tolerance to abortion, so the government should follow their traditions and, therefore, ban it. Furthermore, it frequently leads to infertility. Many women cannot have children forever, since they resort to abortion, so authorities should prohibit it and encourage women to give a birth.
In conclusion, even though some social workers say that abort should not be legal, I think that women should officially have the opportunity to decide for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3801369863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92531311827 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5222118916 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183689144783 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053379120484 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625286348746 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136435699646 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712535083145 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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