Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently I read an article about the increase in the number of interrupted pregnancies in Kazakhstan. Some practitioners state that the government should legalize it. However, some priests claim that it should be prohibited. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of legalizing abort.
Let us start with the reasons why some doctors argue that gestation termination should be under law. The first reason is that it may reduce the number of deaths among the pregnant. Many women annually die of abort complications in uncertified places, because the legislation does not permit them to stop their pregnancy in hospitals, but if officials allows them, the number of faulty abort will decline. Another reason is that it can contribute to a decrease in the number of abort. if authorities makes abortion legal, but under the condition that, before the termination, pregnant women should pass numerous social workers, such as psychologists, in order to listen to their problems and attempt to convince them to keep the child. Therefore, after the analysis of these reasons, it is clear that officials should introduce a law permitting women to interrupt the development of the child inside.
Nevertheless, some priests advocate that abortion should be banned. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, women have no rights to intentionally end the pregnancy. Potential children already have a soul in the body of their mothers, so any decision to stop the growth implies that they intend to murder them, which is wrong according to, for instance, Islam religion. Secondly, it will prevent many pregnant women from making a rush decision about abort. Females in Karaganda city, for example, often regret after they stop the development of a future child, since they decide to do this under either insignificant circumstances or influence, which frequently fade upon the birth. As a result, after the consideration of these arguments, it is obvious that society should be opposed to abort.
In conclusion, although a great deal of priests say that the public should be against abort, I think that the country should let mothers to resort to it for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21546961326 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80879870086 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3816744113 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245130566505 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840320920098 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686565313808 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164266538324 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598164259821 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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