Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is deemed by some people that children are squandering their precious time by reading a fictional book that can be utilized for more productive work. I completely agree with this notion and believe that time can be spent in fertile way by yielding activities such as sports and extracurricular.
Firstly, sitting at same place reading fictional stories for longer hours and living in a world full of fantasy would not help child to become a better. Consequently, they may become socially less active because of the less interaction with the real world and lethargic to do any task when asked which might hinder to their overall growth and personality. Therefore, it is better to involve in sports activities during leisure time which will encourage the teenagers to become socially more active and enthusiastic. For example, sports like basketball or cricket need to be played in group that will instill a team spirit within them and provides an opportunity to make new friends and socially more responsible.
Another point to consider is that, leisure time could be more ideally used by nurturing the hobbies that could help them to improve their extracurricular activities such as singing and drawing that will give them a chance to compete with the real world and stand ahead and instead of reading novel and day dreaming. For instance, renowned singer of India Shreya Goshal was good at singing during school which helped her to find her passion and make a career in a field which she loves to do.
In conclusion, it is ideal to engage in various sport games or extracurricular task instead of reading story book because it will help the children to become more social and active in the journey of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94482758621 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67328350698 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.640435529 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245899857192 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102931923548 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653428423284 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154394431409 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479237162693 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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