Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In many countries, many parents send their children to preschool before they are sending to primary school since they believe it is more advantage to their children and other trust it is better keep babies with families. This essay agrees that children should stay with their families till it is right age to enter a primary school and in the meantime will discuss both points of view.
Firstly, it is true that sending kids in their early age to nursary school give many advantages hence it teaches many useful skills that are necessary for doing grate in their primary school. Moreover, children learn how to interact with others. Also, give education of good and bad habits and good manners that are parents cannot teach at home. Not only that but also these children are less shy and more comfortable in sociaty. In addition, preschool kids learn to speak quicker than others how are staying at home because, they spend 5 to 6 hours with children who are older and can talk effectively. Furthermore, children can play and have fun with same age kids make them delighte and cheerful.
Finally, sending children to preschool at their early age is a bad idea since many nursery schools put unnecessary academical presser in reading and writing. It makes kids unhappy and even some negative mentality if they fail to do much better than other children in their age. More to it, there are news that we can hear daily abusing children physically and mentally in preschools. For an example, couple of days before I saw in news that 2 years old baby punished by preschool teacher in Sri Lanka.
In conclusion, sending kids to nursery school have both advantages and disadvantages in many ways. I believe that it is better to send kids to school in their right age not their pre-age since we can give good education via family environment. Furthermore, there is no secure and happier environment other than family for small children and they like to be with their parents and grandparents at their early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, even so, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82369942197 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4522861662 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2504990556 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288481451238 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106707042318 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633853395087 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206711778883 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686896089089 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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