Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that they produce not the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With increasing technical advancements environment pollution is increasing over time. It is often suggest that organizations and privately owned institutions must be liable to pay charges in order to clean up wastage instead of higher authorities. While i believe that businesses supposed to be responsible to spend money on cleaning pollution that they cause, government should also take some steps to eliminate this serious issue.
On the one hand, For several reasons, enterprises are held accountable for contributing some money in reducing pollution problem. First of all, imposing charges on businesses and industries would lead to reduction in contamination of atmosphere as they will try to develop innovative ways of dealing with pollution they create instead of allocating money each year towards clearing pollution. Therefore, it would assist in making the environment clean and by saving their budget firms can provide social services to community that is extremely important. Secondly, if the monetary sources are provided by administration for preventing pollution, companies would not put efforts to protect the environment. Hence, it may not only contaminate the environment by also waste national funds that can be spent on facilitating community with other services. Finally, it would be unfair if someone else is paying for the wrong doing of anyone else as production houses and companies spread 75% of the pollution so it is their obligation to pay for the treatment of disposal of pollutants. For example, smoke generates from production in companies that contaminates air as well as they dump waste material under the ground which result in creating soil pollution. So, Right person must be liable for devoting some money to protect environment pollution.
On the other hand, rulers should provide funds in order to protect the country from dangerous affects of pollution. First of all, Income taxes are paid by everyone as government impose taxes on earning to collect money for the welfare of society and to develop infrastructure in the nation. That is why, there must be equal participation of government to provide funds. Secondly, the primary function of higher authorities is to provide protection and support to the natives of the country. Consequently, it becomes mandatory for them to provide finance to eliminate problems faced by citizens.
To conclude, Although i believe that pollution should be prevented by the privates bodies who spreads via production activities, government is also responsible to make the country clean and beautiful to live in.
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also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 8.3376753507 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42821782178 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01351703547 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532178217822 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2529243068 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17955080056 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549544081877 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480618084963 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121837689748 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573438387153 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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