some people think that drinking if done responsibly is not dangerous while others believe that consumption in any form is dangerous. describe both point of views and share your opinion
People have different views about consumption of alcohol is safe and sound or harmful. While there are some benefits if liquor is consumed in limit , I believe that drinking spirit is hazardous.
On the one hand, drinking is beneficial for health if taken in small quantity. It is scientifically proven that if people consume glass of red wine on daily basis have less chances of suffering from heart attack. Nowadays, in some places alcohol is also used in cooking and baking food. There are multi cuisine restaurants in which they serve flambé dishes ,in which they use alcohol in less quantity for preparation. In many countries, people celebrate the occasion with a bottle of wine or champagne.
On the other hand, some people are of an opine that it is dangerous for health, as if taken on regular basis and in high quantity it might affect our neuro process. Many people tend to get addicted as they consume on daily basis which leads to increase in crime rate and other problems. Due to intake of hard drinks, communication barrier is increasing more between families and peers, as people don’t have control on their senses . As per government survey, there is an increase in crime rate due to alcohol consumption.
In conclusion, taking alcohol has pros and cons. It is beneficial for health if consumed in less quantity and occasionally. However, consumption of alcohol on regular basis and daily life will not only affect health but also have impact on regular life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... benefits if liquor is consumed in limit , I believe that drinking spirit is hazar...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e glass of red wine on daily basis have less chances of suffering from heart attack....
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...ng from heart attack. Nowadays, in some places alcohol is also used in cooking and bak...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urants in which they serve flambé dishes ,in which they use alcohol in less quanti...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... On the other hand, some people are of an opine that it is dangerous for health, as if ...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... don't have control on their senses . As per government survey, there is an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91235059761 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6362421528 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5739347407 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128035931568 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462861272345 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488265508424 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092866863216 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712247023622 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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