Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university. Others believe that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss both views and give your opinion
University learning is a first step for the career of any individual. Many opine that students should have the choice to select subjects for the school curriculum based on their interests and capabilities. Whereas, others believe that government should be responsible for designing the syllabus for students. In my opinion, the responsibility to decide the academic subjects should rest on government as it will consider the job sector and industry standards.
One major reason why certain people are in the interest of allowing students to choose the subjects to study is that pupils will have the benefit to study the courses that are of their interest as well as ability. Thus, students will not be forced to study any subjects that disinterest them or be more challenging for them. Another significant reason is that the university students will have a chance to build a career in their field of passion. For instance, if students have the freedom to include subjects like music in their academic course, they would be able to develop skills for their passion and make a career in it.
On the contrary, there are people who think that the government must decide on the school subjects. Firstly, government will design the course content according to the job markets and latest demands in the industry. As a result, the unemployment rate will be diminished as majority of the school and college pass outs will have the knowledge and skill set required by the companies. Moreover, having the academic syllabus planned by the government will aid to identify which subjects are a pre-requisite for specific courses. This would in turn, help learning institutions to cater courses and syllabus according to the different sectors.
To summarize, education plays an important role for the growth and development of any nation. There has always been a discontent regarding people's opinion whether the university subjects should be decided by government or the students. However, in my view, choice of subjects by the government will be more advantageous to the society provided that the government will decide the courses based on industry requirement and will guarantee employment for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19943820225 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80943114494 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480337078652 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.083946984 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375848074443 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133268142979 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880434775745 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248659216726 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092109543596 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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