Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after the children.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy
Children care is the prime responsibility of parents.In the era when both the parents have to work for meeting both ends,so many people think that government should enforce such a policy where it had to pay one of the parents who nurture them.So this essay will describe the favorable and unfavorable views of the policy.
There are many benefits of this policy.To begin with,this will provide financial security to the people.Financial security will lead to healthy children as the parents can take care of children in a better way.This will ultimately leads to strong,healthy and sound nation.In addition to this, people will not afraid of having more children and will definitely result better future of coming generation.Further more,it will result more harmonious relation between parents and children.For instance,because of this policy in Canada,Ireland and other foreign countries, children are not considered as liability because they are fully supported by the local government. Moreover children are not curse rather are blessings of God.
On the contrary,Public consider it as the only method of increasing income.In addition , most of the people claims that parents become carefree and does not take the responsibility of their children. Moreover generation also does not obey and respect the parents as they think it is the government obligation to look after them.
So it can be concluded that it has become must for the government to deploy such policy.This will result in betterment and prosperity of the society and nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40329218107 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1270545517 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56378600823 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.462123946 49.4020404114 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.833333333 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265822965407 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127851013398 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634465562711 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151510296593 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755258430389 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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