Today, we all are living in the modern society and honestly, people won't care about the historic sculptures, music and arts. But if we just take a pause and see behind us, we will realize that history is vanishing each day and so the popularity of Indian history is at saturation point. That's true to say that majority of the people mindset is quite different these days and they think government body spending a lot of expenditures on an old material, which does not apply in any sense to them and instead people think if our government will spend more money on the other things. Today, I am standing here and want to speak against the favor of the motion and strictly say we must respect the arts and cultures.
Erstwhile, arts, paintings etc. are the foremost things through which India or any other country's shadow reflects. For instance, the Taj Mahal of Agra in India which is among the top 7 wonders of the world. Through this, we can withstand and represent our Nation otherwise no one even dares to dig into the real pictures. There are a plethora of other identities in the world which will also be supporting the government in generating the revenues for their country and just think revenues which can only be collected if people take care the things pretty well, otherwise, who will care then.
Histories are not just restricted to some extent but they will also teach us anonymous things in our day to day lives. For illustration, India Gate of Delhi in India. It teaches us how patriotism would get respected. The soldier who died for our Nation tells us that we must love our country and help them in the best way possible. It also tells us that we live for the country and will die for the Nation if required and we must love and salute our dear motherland India. It is fine to say that the government must spend money on other things as well but surely not with the replacement of our own historic equipment.
To conclude, one must take the responsibility fully for the betterment of our old heritage, it is not just applicable to some government bodies but for us as well. Eventually, whatever we are doing, we are showing care for our nation. And please, do not forget that old is gold.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... Indian history is at saturation point. Thats true to say that majority of the people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, so, then, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56783919598 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45713742085 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51256281407 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1875247443 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118558273457 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338036871827 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437956591242 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750502099435 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247142594634 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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