Respected Sir,
I am pleased to inform you that I got selected for the 2 weeks Augmented Reality short course training at Nottingham College, England from 01.10.2018 to 15.10.2018. My name is Alex Philips and my ID Number is 89175664. I have never been to England before and looking for your prompt support in terms of accommodation and some other imperative details.
I am a vegetarian and my ethics won't allow me to share the kitchen with someone who is non-vegetarian. That's why I am looking for an Ensuite room on my first priority list followed by Ensuite Double room at second priority, but please make sure that accommodation would be on a budget ($120-$150) and have separate toilet room as well.
Is this possible to have a bus or cab services from my main North campus building to my home at the city center? The course timings would be shut around 4 PM. so I will need the bus or a cab facility at 5:30 PM. If I have this service than I can easily be able to save crucial time from my chart otherwise, I need to go for a 5kms solo walk to catch a bus to a city center. To the best of my knowledge, can we have a student card from the student union that would be indeed appreciated?
I hope you can understand the critical situation for a new bee in your country. Let me know if you need any further details.
Sincerely
Alex
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.384 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6092880255 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.563997704 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128415149205 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045363107065 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520025234972 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090227807037 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614223041895 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.