Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing about hosting an international sports events is make the country be better-off or not. It is seemed that this trend has both pros and cons. Both sides of this debate will be analyzed in this essay before a reasonable conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, it is obvious that organizing an international sports events can bring many benefits to the host country. Firstly, this country can push up their reputation in order to attract foreigners and sport lovers to visit it. This is a determinant factor that help the country develop the tourist industry and create a job opportunities for the local people. Secondly, the residents of this nation don't need to go far away to participate in sport event and have a chance to watch monumental sport events in pratical. Thirdly, the sport games organized in the country can help the inhabitants have a vocation for learning and starting to play a healthy activities. Take for an instance, many events of cricket are hosted in India, which is a determining factor to make it become the most popular sport in this country and appeal a range of Indian immerse themselves in this games.
On the other hands, setting up the international sports events can create some drawbacks for the host country. It is obvious the planning and preparing for this might cost a fortune. It can be stated that the host country need to take care for every detail of the events such as locations, capacity ,.. in order to ensure there is no error existing in the event. Moreover, it is hardly to avoid the contradiction among sport lovers who come from different nations. The conflict not only cause some repercussions to the infrastructure but also others spectacular' health. Furthermore, the government should face with many pressure from criticisms in terms of splashing the money for entertainment events. For instance, many people across this globe blame Brazil for using money like water to organize the World Cup event instead of subsidizing the people who live in slum.
In conclusion, two sites associated with everything: one affirmative and one negative points. It all comes down that become a host country for the international sport events can make this country be better-off and worse off. I personally believe that organizing international sports event is a meaning activity. However, we can call for the organizing fund from other countries to make sure that these events don't cost us an arm and a leg.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: activity
...learning and starting to play a healthy activities. Take for an instance, many events of c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pressure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many pressures'.
Suggestion: many pressures
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Suggestion: don't
...ountries to make sure that these events dont cost us an arm and a leg.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78380541989 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.288026423 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288123897026 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897689195137 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606398733855 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184029021603 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350394676991 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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