Some people think it is better to travel by car in the city. Others, however, think traveling by bicycle is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary world, some people prefer to travel by their car, however, others believe that traveling by bicycle is more beneficial for humans. I am in favor of traveling by bicycle rather than traveling by car. This essay will analyze both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, nowadays in every developed country, fast-paced traffic is growing, by driving their car to reach to schools, offices for meetings etc on time. Another advantage of driving two-wheelers and four-wheelers, females independently drive vehicles to go to the office, to drop their children to school and institutes, to go for shopping even in case of emergency. For example, with own car, a person can travel for a long trip with their families and feel comfortable while driving long distance.
On the other hand, today traffic has increased in the cities, moreover, people totally have forgotten the benefits of riding by bicycle even younger generation also have craze of driving scooter or car to school and to local tuition centers. Another positive approach, of traveling by bicycle is to keep the environment pollution free. For instance, in earlier times, our ancestors used bicycles to travel to reach their workplace and also travel long distances. This process keeps the body physically fit and healthy. Now people face many diseases due to fewer workout in a daily routine so doctors advise patients to do cycling once in a day to make the body healthy.
In conclusion, I would like to say that traveling by bicycle, play important role in today's life. Traveling for long distances, people should drive by their car, furthermore, to keep our environment and humankind healthy, everyone must travel by bicycle to their nearest places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'crazed'.
Suggestion: crazed
...cycle even younger generation also have craze of driving scooter or car to school and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10877192982 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72849379009 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6446412701 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215282922165 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909567803449 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824370831731 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160270357995 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908471621315 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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