Accrodingly to my point of view, I'm disagree on this statement. Because I'm wondering to know why its not worth to hosting that kind of sports events in the world.
As far as we know,most of the large international sports events will be conducted in four years to four years. So probebly its not that much a drawback or a trubble making for any organization or any country. Because as we all aware,by hosting these kind of sports events will bring up a good oppertunity to deal with the international level and it will enhance the tourism industry of that country as well.
From the other hand,there will be a big effect to the stock market of the country and most probebly stock market margines will be rapidly incresed with country circumference with advantages when hosting the event.
And also, by hosting these kind of large sports events can be helpful for all the international players as they also can parcitipate the events in oreder to play against another parties and they can recognize the level of them comparatively all of these international players. So I trust,that will be a huge challange for them in order to incresed their sport life as well as the carreer path.
Further to above,by hosting these kind of sport events will bring down lots of oppertunities for the people who is looking for some part time jobs or contracted jobs
So as a conclution,I do not think that the large international sporting events only brings the negative outcomes and it is really worth to hosting them in order to improve even the peace in the world at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75724637681 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71446944364 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.4728078732 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.888888889 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250080893249 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098023447064 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873391462126 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14073787129 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943347743915 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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