Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this world of globalization, person's educational qualifications is crucial aspect for a long career. While a group of people think that an institutional degree playing a part for bright future another group think it is no longer relevant for current scenario. In this essay, I'll scrutinise these perspective and give my persuasion.
Firstly, why people believe that degree is essential for future jobs? Well, particular fields requires particular specifications in order to run there administration smoothly. For example, only an Accounts degree holder knows and handle ups and down of Finance for a company. Further, in hospital, only a medical or medical degree holder can be employed by the employers.
On the other hand, denial from the degree for a person achievement in his coming life is also a question. Why they go for this idea ? It's a point to consider because they say in order to do something accurate, a man have to be full grasp on it and he doesn't need any degree from a big institution. Like a worker in house making knows all about paint because he is working for so many years than who need a degree of painting to polish his skills. But, he cannot make a professional decision that can only be understood by a specified degree holder person.
To conclude, although a professional degree is very useful in a long, long career than some people are very strong in his field that they don't need any qualifications to do their work. In my opinion, having a degree is more crucial and sensible for a bright like a star future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8592701847 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4242804386 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152233448571 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549351930778 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391887437456 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960935186353 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324342934263 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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