Some people think that a life is good for people as it is while others believe that constant change can be too demanding on people.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although there are few people who feel that life is better as it is, there are others vouching for constant change to improve their life. This essay will discuss why I concur with the latter's perception.
To begin with, there are certain individuals planning for a life which is steady. This is because either they are not too ambitious or they do not like to be running in a hectic corporate life style. As a result, they do have a stress free life and they get to spend more quality time with their family members. Furthermore, they are often not driven by the materialistic happiness that they get from buying a luxury car, a house, or an expensive tech-gadget. They are content with what they have and believe that is what they deserve as per almighty.
However, there are others striving to be progressive in their life. Such people are the ones constantly working with their strength while they keep improving on their weakness. In this way, they will be competing at highest level and will be rewarded financially as well. Moreover, majority of such individuals are career drive in nature. They will continuously be polishing their existing skills while trying to acquire new skills. Therefore, they will be more relevant to the current market demands and giving competition to the younger generation workforce.
In conclusion, from my perspective, although having a secure and stress free life is good to a certain extent, being futuristic and having an urge to be in better position in terms of career is the challenge an individual should embrace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91320754717 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64530724291 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1996433281 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186508628011 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071269429097 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609040773331 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125736616825 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629230772538 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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