Some people think that mobile phones are most useful for their professional life other thinks that mobile phones are most useful in their personal life. Discuss of them and give your opinion.
In this century, technology become rapidly an important part of our lifestyle. In this essay i will discuss about my opinion and both conception on topic on the following.
Firstly, the main purpose of technology is undoubtedly to make our lives easier. However the most revolutionary invention is certain mobile phones. They are easy to use, small and it can be taken wherever you go. Over the years, mobile phones become more and more clever and it is said that in the near future they will totally control us. Moreover, these devices which were meant to improve communication, today are capable to recognize your face and connect to internet, in other words it is a large source of information inside your pocket. Surerly mobile phones are useful for professional life, for instance it is more advantageous to have all the important papers on your phone instead of having it in your office. To put in another way, keeping the documents in your phone will make it easy to find without any risks of losing.
Secondly, unfourtunately lot of people are addicted to their devices. This controversial issue can lead to different problems for example insecurity, anxiety, loneliness not to mention about eyes fatigue.
Above all, mobile phones should be used only for solving important works not for spending time improperly. Their purpose is to make our life easier, sadly these days technology is indispensable to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05084745763 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74708000939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3747486093 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6923076923 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313223324443 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894906264571 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801278127257 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149528403271 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976876699092 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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