Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
This is a fact that technical advancements has a great influence on social interactions among people. Many argue that in these days individuals are becoming more and more sociable, others put forward the arguments that people have a wide communication gap now a days compared to past. While i believe that technology brings some negative impact on social activities, it has brought people closer to each other by developing various excellent means of communication.
On the one hand, The trend of using modern technology has a number of affects on the social bonding of masses. Firstly, In the contemporary era majority of humans spend time on browsing internet because work in every field of life has become automatic that brings convenience and saving in time. Therefore, instead of contacting other people face to face, people prefer to search about everything on search engines such as google. Secondly, In the fast-paced world most of the young ones play indoor games and spend whole day in front of computer screen or cell phones. Moreover, children has access to internet in these days, so they have keen interest in playing video games rather than going outside to do physical activities. Hence, they have sedentary lifestyle. Becoming busy in lives also restrict people to be socialize as in today’s competitive age mankind is craving for earning more money and overlook social relationships. That is why, due to advancements in innovations people rely more on computers and phones.
On the other hand, i firmly believe that automation leads to effective ways of communicating. First of all, in ancient times society relied on sending letters or meeting people face to face. However, nowadays people have more attractive options such as WhatsApp, Instagram, facebook that provides instant services. So, individuals are able to contact anyone immediately without any delay. In addition to this, it becomes easier to communicate with people all around the world as social websites can be accessed 24 hours. It does not only eliminate communication gap but also build strong relations among people. Last but not least, currently people have a platform to make new friends via social sites that allows individuals to share their problems to each other which brings many benefits for them.
To conclude, Although technology causes communication gap among masses today that creates many issues for them, i think that it provides fast ways of talking that has provided effective communication.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25187032419 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79170792243 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605985037406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7185101759 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.842105263 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19804061277 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527145025364 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480721553254 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117887607411 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266945951297 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.