Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Museums are seen as a place with different purposes, some think they ought to be an entertainment option for people, while others believe museums are meant to be a schooling method. In my opinion, I do believe museums are places to educate oneself through animated experiences with more enjoyable ways of learning compare to just reading a book.
On one hand, it can be argued that museums are places to entertain people, because although there can be found variable stories, antiques and even games, the main reason why they were invented was more likely to teach people about certain topics or in...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to compare'
Suggestion: to compare
...es with more enjoyable ways of learning compare to just reading a book. On one hand,...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...le of all ages can visit to learn about an specific topic with materials that help...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to complete' or 'complete'.
Suggestion: to complete; complete
...specific topic with materials that help completing the understanding and the knowledge lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66313537305 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5383419922 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.375 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348993465531 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182180120607 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795900421106 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239190405098 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738585644613 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.