Some people think that people travel more these days.
Why is it happening? Is it a positive or a negative development?
Most people today would like travel in different places. A few decades ago, only the rich can afford to travel since they can spend more. There are several reasons why the number of travellers has been increasing.
First, there is a healthy competition in the transport industry. Long ago, there are only few airline companies so they control and monopolize the industry. Today there are a lot of airline companies and this is the reason why the price of airfare became affordable. Airline companies, nowadays, have their own websites so that it can entice new customers to use their services. They also lowered the ticket prices by developing promotional fares which is beneficial for the customers. Another reason is convenience. People today can use the internet to search their preferred tourist destination. They can also view the best route to maximize the cost of travel and time. Electronic maps are also available on the internet.
There are several benefits that a traveller can get through travelling. Initially, the traveller can eat some exotic foods and see new sights. The individual can also experience new culture and traditions. These new experiences can give the traveller new insights on life and the environment.
In my own experience, visiting Thailand with my mother was such a wonderful experience. I was hesitant at first because I knew beforehand that ticket prices for that destination are pricey. I changed my mind when I saw the promotional fare of Cebu Pacific on their website. After we booked the flight, I then searched the internet for our hotel accommodation. We really enjoyed the trip when we visited some Buddhist temple.
To sum it up, more people would like to travel because of its advantages. Furthermore, the trend will keep on increasing in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79284354364 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0547911603 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7391304348 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9130434783 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163515932831 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444232820636 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554045188245 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102656473686 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622883252153 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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