some people think radio is more fun and easier in every way than TV. What is your opinion?
Several people argue radio is more fun and easier in every way than TV. I think this is something that is comfortable in using electronic devices for everyone, giving rise to different assumptions and perceptions from each user of the both.
Altough, radio is considered by some to be more fun, I think this is because in its use it is more flexible, it can be reached in various remote areas which television is difficult to reach. Besides that, radio access is not too complicated, usually there are only a few buttons to turn it on and then you can choose which broadcast or frequency you want to listen to. However, generally in remote areas, in order to gain radio network or access to broadcast frequencies, you have to install a pole as a supporting tool, the poles installed are generally quite high.Therefore radio is sometimes a separate history for everyone because it is also the first electronic means of crossing information from several centuries earlier that still survives to this day. So it is natural for radio people more fun.
However, TV is also fun though not so much for some people. My view on this is because TV is sometimes difficult to reach for some people because of the high price, but that's not all, TV is sometimes difficult to access the network in certain areas, for example areas with lots of mountains or in dense forest areas, it's difficult to get broadcasts or frequencies. Although the information provided by it is sometimes more complete than radio and the operation process is also easy, it requires a process for people who are new to it and the number of access buttons provided depends on the respective producer company. TV media also only existed after several decades of radio. This feels natural if people do not put their heart on it.
In conclusion,TV and radio are media that depend on the comfort of each user to decide which one of them is the most enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73214285714 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64114058368 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.183902191 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297856552589 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139511655651 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146690374355 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193751607177 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953082116037 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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