Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
This is a fact that both educators and guardians plays an important role in the lives of children. Many argue that it is a responsibility of school teachers to infuse children to recognize what is acceptable or unacceptable. Others argue that school staff is accountable for providing academic knowledge. While i believe that the fundamental duty of instructors is to provide education to children, children can learn values and virtues of their life.
On the one hand, it is thought by a few masses that teachers are mainly for making children qualified. Firstly, in today’s contemporary era every parents spend huge money in an effort to make their children well educated. Moreover, as teachers have deep understanding of all subjects as well teaching experience. Therefore, they are oblige to make intelligent and literate. Secondly, educating children is the primary activity of tutors as care takers are not able to provide education lime children. Finally, higher education is requited for pursuing good career as this is the priority to get a job. Hence, teacher are regarded as the only way to make them independent.
On the other hand, i think that students learn the difference between right and wrong in their school. First of all, Organizing various contests and competitions allow children to learn good behaviour as when they accompany other peers, they learn which behaviour is positive. In addition to this , Discipline is a significant skill that is inculcated by school as it makes them able to follow rules and regulations that are extremely important and mandatory by law. Last but not least, children are punished for wrong doing by teachers as they try to maintain a peaceful environment in the classroom. Consequently, pupils learn what is acceptable in the community and what can cause penalty to them.
To conclude, Although the main profession of a instructor to teach curriculum subjects to infants, i also support that in these days teachers focus on personal growth of learners by educating them important lessons of life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17365269461 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9269627116 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8976343569 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200029205185 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686376700397 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513101482387 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117376630911 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221264840757 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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