It is an irrefutable fact that Travelling in different countries always memorable and unforgettable moments, which makes people’s mind fresh. Some people assert that visit in different countries should be difficult, if you don’t know the culture and traditions, where you want to plan to go. I agree with this statement and in this essay, I intend to explain my views before reasonable can be drawn.
There are several reasons that why we need to understand the rules and regulations of the other nations. Firstly, there are lots of people travel in other places, due to some official-work or on summer vacations. But, The problem starts, when we do illegal activities which is common in their own country, such as eating food in public areas, not to allow take the photos and filming the local community. For an example, In Singapore, Folks are not allowed inside the building, if you caught by the building manager or staff then definitely there is huge penalty.
Moreover, Around the thousands of immigrants move to the other countries such as Canada, Australia, in order to secure a bright future. Most of the students found problems like tradition food, leasing house for rent and community rules. According to the survey conducted by the Canadian Government found ghat 80 percent of the International students work extra hours, instead of working 20 hours as per Canada rule. In addition, which causes problems while applying work-permit after study.
To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that it is very important for everyone, when we visit any place to make sure, learn their culture and human rights of the country, instead of put ourself in trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99285714286 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6748164156 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653571428571 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0017805861 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15873532603 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049272749122 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616165506699 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859845446372 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719924600974 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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