some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
it is important to consider whether art is powerful or not. While some people think that it is not necessary, others argue that it plays a fundamental rule in our society. I completely agree with the latter opinion for two specific reasons, which we will mention in this essay.
First and foremost, art has significantly played a pivotal rule in forming culture. Not only because of its effect on architectural designs, which represents any culture, but also because of its powerful presence in historical themes and antiques. one example is the Eiffel tower in paris, if it was not built as much artistic as it is, it would never be a major sign of the French culture. Another example is also from paris, which is the Louver museume, with all its antikes, drawings and art, it became a mirror of the European history. As a consequance, the tourism rate is higher in countries that have rich artistic history.
Secondly, art is essential for entertainment purposes. it is present in cinema production, visual effects, music tracks, scenario writing, filming and all media aspects. it always requires art as part of its creativity. Disney's productions, for instance, one of the main entertainment sources nowadays, can strongly support this point. Moreover, the income of such strong media productions can be billion dollars that strengthens the economy.
In conclusion, although some people consider art as unimportant issue, I completey think it has a pivotal impact on culture and entertainment aspects which consequantly trigger country's economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27091633466 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90918506192 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5317335994 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0691400943199 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227330539271 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403225023233 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580299969294 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597422104162 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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