Some people think that young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are different opinions in regard to the question of whether youngsters are appropriate for significant positions in politics or not. The debate over this topic seems to consist of two irreconcilable camps. Both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my own perspective is given.
From one point of view, young people do not have enough experience to become top-notch politicians. Thus, it is expected that they can make significant mistakes which could have a negative impact on society. For example, they may conduct lows that will have an unfavorable effect on the economy. Therefore, elderly people seem to be more suitable for such positions.
From another perspective, adolescents are more contemporary and energetic. They have enough stamina to resist stress and work hard. Moreover, they may be more creative in solving problems and their brain works more effectively. If they do not have experience in some areas, they may ask for advice their older colleagues/
In conclusion, there are merits to both sides of the argument over whether young people should work in the government or not. However, after analyzing the opposing camps, my personal view is that youngsters are suitable for these positions more because they have a higher potential, energy and creativity in solving problems. If they work in politics, our life will be advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22123893805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85039563336 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9304842199 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7692307692 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189138014703 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065659539487 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780312287111 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120569492166 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069357214693 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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