Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree
Recent years, certain groups claim that people could be discouraged from eating junk foods if administrations could implement heavy tax rate on this industry. I strongly disagree with this view.
On the one hand, one of the main cause that the general public eat junk foods as a habit was because the price of them are substantially lower than the healthy ones. In order to attract customers, big franchises such as McDonald and Burger King target their marketing strategies at low-end customers. They set their products price at a very low level, tempting consumers to visit their stores frequently. If authorities could implement a extra tax policy onto this business, this phenomenon can be alleviated at certain level.
On the other hand, apart from the monetary policy, there are other ways for the government to prevent their citizens from eating fast foods. An existing phenomenon in the society is that the majority of the general public citizens have no ideas how many detrimental effects these foods could bring to our body. These foods usually contain extremely high calories which could expose individuals to several disease such as diabetes and high blood pressure.To address this issue, governments should raise more campaigns within the local communities to increase people’s awareness of this problems.
In addition,for those people who have higher income level, this policy might only have limited effects. They may disregard the increased tax and continue consume junk foods anyways. For instance, in China, it was reported that 40 percentage of consumers of the fast food industry belonged to wealthy classes, and the trend had kept growing.
In conclusion, I mostly disagree with the view that adding taxation to unhealthy food will alter the public’s eating habit. Even thought it can work in certain degree, there are better ways to do it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23920265781 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60945214865 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634551495017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.615828536 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201720937627 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626402592089 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471878554745 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111439829536 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329616341974 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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