Some people thinks that money is one the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?
At present, money plays pivotal role in our life to get better lifestyle and to complete the basic need of every person. Whereas some people believe that money is the only factor towards happiness while others think happiness has nothing to do with money. Nevertheless, money and happiness are different concepts altogether. Let's discuss both views in further paragraphs.
One the one side, money brings happiness to numerous people because they can buy anything in the world which give them happiness. For instance, there is nothing free in this expensive era from daily meals to luxury lifestyle which easily describe why we need money to get happiness. Secondly, it gives people state of mind like having big chunk of money make them feel comfortable and confident about their future which directly promotes happiness.
On the other side, others think that healthy lifestyle, friendship or having strong family relations can create more happiness than money. To support this, people enjoy pleasure while surrounded by their love ones which they consider more valuable than any amount of money. Certainly, job satisfaction can be counted as a key factor to discover happiness. For example, people feel satisfied and happy if they are doing well or getting rewarded for their hard work in their profession. Most importantly, helping others can also give birth to happiness. Like helping and feeding poor people give more satisfaction than buying materialistic things which we don’t even need.
At last, after describing both views I can conclude that happiness and money are both interlinked to each other. Money can give you happiness for certain amount of period so people should not overlook and sacrifice their real pleasures of life while earning money and they should not equate money as a vital factor in bringing happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52915793954 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7299530644 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429781627114 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150791533067 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12956112299 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286583719659 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761400259412 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.