Some say that important think about rich is, it gives a person the opportunity to help. Do you agree or disagree?
Gap is widening between have and have-nots. Undoubtedly, by having surplus money, rich people have potential to help other and I do favour the view of providing something back to the society in case of having excess money.
Firstly, spending money over education and healthcare facilities can help in improving the lifestyle of society members, as industrialists have huge amount of money, which can be utilized on allocating educational provisions for have-nots, leads to have inclining rate of literacy. Moreover, providing aids in healthcare consequently have decline in the levels of acute diseases that can help in constructing a healthy and happy society.
Secondly, creating job opportunity and development of slum areas can help in booming the levels and livelihood of masses. Levels of unemployment can easily be reduced by the active involvement of affluent people and their contact’s investments in building opportunities for those who are unable to survive. What’s more, construction of housing amenities for people living in slums can be helpful in making society more developed and lively.
However, rich people also have their own interest as well as expenses that are required to maintain their business levels and to be into race of competition and for advertising investments are needed that can only be settled down by putting their surplus money.
In conclusion, with the development richer are becoming richer, so, it is good if spending are made by opulent members of the society that not only helps to decline the gap, also make the society a prosperous society to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e made by opulent members of the society that not only helps to decline the gap, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33203125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97743128315 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7754776691 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698637115816 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349703120942 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249343553552 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397440814782 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180006129902 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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