Some say that the standard of behaviour among children has worsened and that this is their parents' fault; others say that schools are to blame.
These days, overall behaviour of people is going through a difficult phase. If, it is said that children are becoming victim of this change and have highly contributed towards making behaviour worse, than it won't be wrong. There is a mix opinion, as few people believe, parents to be main reason for this problem, while others believe schools are responsible for this problem. This essay, will discuss the effects of parents and school on children and who is responsible for these issues.
Nowadays, children are facing a fear of becoming highly aggressive and subsequently, becoming less accepting. Moreover, we have seen children facing issues and becoming socially ill. In this case, parents are thought to be highly responsible for this. As,children spend majority of their time at home and adapt to learn from their parents. In initial days of growth, children tend to learn from the behaviour of their parents. Moreover, it is important for parents to maintain a balance and cater their children's needs.
While on the other hand, there is an opinion amongst people, who believe school to be main culprit for the problem of rude behaviour. Whenever, a child starts to learn, he learns from his surroundings and how other students react, what sort of word and language is used by his circle. However, schools play an important role in building character of children. As, they act as a catalyst and a source of knowledge to differentiate between what's wrong and right.
In my opinion, both parents and school have their own set of responsibilities. They have to adapt and act accordingly. Moreover, a balance is needed to be maintained amongst using carrot and stick, in order to overcome the issue of behaviour worsening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04529616725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72745526998 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1264801471 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1764705882 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233145977503 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791777366186 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049327367044 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140992947646 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466793898068 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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