Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that the cyberspace and books is the best source for seeking information while, others opine to search for advice from people around us. In my opinion, I believe the web and the books to be the ideal source for retrieving information or seeking advice.
On the one hand, with rampant increase in the use of electronic media and easy access to books, these sources have now become the information hub for thousands of people around the globe. A variety of material is available instantly from these sources at any point in time, be it day or night. Moreover, the web provides many different platforms to seek information and/or advice from, such as Wikipedia. Furthermore, the internet also provides easy access to books online, where people can seek expert opinion easily. Last but not the least, people can get opinion from thousands of people, present at any geographic location with a matter of just few clicks. For example, I myself have joined a group named “The Mum Hub” over the web to seek advice related to parenting issues, which I must say is very helpful.
On the other hand, many people stress to look for information from people around us, such as family, friends or relatives. They believe that information from these sources is more reliable than a web, where anyone can post anything, and it is hard to verify the authenticity of those claims. They are of the view that the books and the web are more likely to bombard people with information overload and it may get hard for people to filter relevant information.
To recapitulate, seeking information from people, the books and the web has its own merits and demerits as discussed above. However, in my opinion, I regard, books and the web to be the best source for retrieving information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ay or night. Moreover, the web provides many different platforms to seek information and/or ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86038961039 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61641378602 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50974025974 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.14291507 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295161635991 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114060386545 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589453892484 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186675474546 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290043300536 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.