Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that the cyberspace and books is the best source for seeking information while, others opine to search for advice from people around us. I regard web and the books as the ideal source for retrieving information or seeking advice.
On the one hand, with rampant increase in the use of electronic media, the web and the have become the main source for procuring information around the globe. A variety of material is available instantly from these sources at any point in time, be it day or night. Moreover, the web provides many different platforms to seek information and/or advice from, such as Wikipedia., where people can simply type in any keyword and gain access to in-depth knowledge quickly and easily. Last but not the least, people can get opinion from thousands of people, present at any geographic location with a matter of just few clicks. For example, I have joined a group named “The Mum Hub” over the web to seek guidance related to parenting issues, which I must say is very helpful.
On the other hand, many people stress to look for information from people around us, such as family, friends or relatives. They believe that information from these sources is more reliable than a web, where anyone can post anything, and it is hard to verify the authenticity of those claims. They are of the view that the books and the web are more likely to bombard people with information overload by providing an overwhelming number of choices, making hard for people to filter relevant information.
To recapitulate, seeking information from people, the books and the web has its own merits and demerits as discussed above. However, in my opinion, I regard, books and the web to be the best source for retrieving information.
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| 2019-08-17 | bhatvishal@ | 67 | view |
| 2019-08-17 | bhatvishal@ | 61 | view |
| 2019-07-19 | Shane | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-16 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-13 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
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- There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays. Why is this a problem? What can be done to reduce it? 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Scientists have been warning from many years about environmental protection and we should limit the use of energy in daily lives. What are the reasons for that? How to encourage people to take an interest towards environment protection? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ay or night. Moreover, the web provides many different platforms to seek information and/or ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90365448505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65693922701 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9812636558 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264247151275 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105309972961 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680862721494 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16661167189 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020931980497 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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