Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?
Recently, technology has become a major reason for facilitating most aspects of daily life, including using the Internet for study. However, most people believe that there are negative effects and should reduce reliance on it in the study. From my point of view, I believe that education became easier with the internet for students. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, Internet has become a quick way to accomplish academic tasks. It is obvious that, through the Internet, research is accomplished faster through practical research sites that contain a large number of approved scientific papers. Also, the ideal example of this is the translation sites have the translator getting the work done in the least possible time and become a means of exchanging information in different languages.
Secondly, the internet will give a variety of knowledge resources. For instance, if there is a complicated mathematics equation you will have the opportunity to earn different explanations from many other resources. Another point to consider is that the Internet will encourage your mind's abilities to create new ways of learning because you have access to different sources.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that students must increase their interaction with the Internet for several important reasons, such as the speed of achievement and the multiplicity of sources of knowledge.
- In the future people may have to live on other planets Some think that is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views and 58
- Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 67
- Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y advantages. First, it gives the person flexibility regarding working hours. For...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...people in the world. Third, some people dont like working for someone else and havin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly, there is no regular stream of income ,especially at the beginning. This can be...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...good potential and people should choose according to their preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33950617284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93150091371 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8723207588 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2173913043 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431735160707 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129086199734 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123328629025 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28997347421 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573902929375 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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