Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people thought it to be justifiable if sports professionals get higher remuneration than those who are pursuing other significant professions, while others oppose this viewpoint. In my opinion, I believe that it is not fair to give less wages to people involved in other important jobs.
Famous sports professional should be paid more than the people in other important professions is a good idea, according to some. In other words, people think that sports person make vital contribution to highlight and bring fame to the nation's name in popular sports events such as world cup and Olympics. Furthermore, being the brand ambassadors of the sports, they represent their home country and should definitely be paid more to earn resources that will help them to maintain good health and fitness.
On the other hand, some people think that professionals like Scientists, Engineers, and teachers should be paid higher wages than sports professionals and I agree. The main reason is that former group of people play an instrumental role in the overall development of a country. For instance, when successful scientific researches are carried out, it brings both name and fame to the country's name. Also, teachers have a great role in creating successful professionals such as scientists, engineers, and sports players, and a country's progress is dependent on those professionals. Hence, paying higher salaries to these professionals keep them motivated to make their contribution to the progress of a country in all aspects.
In conclusion, while some people think that sports celebrities should be paid higher than people involved in other important professions, others, however, oppose this practice. I strongly believe that professionals like teachers, scientist and engineers play more important role in the economic and technical growth of a country; hence, deserve to earn more money than sports persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97272041515 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.1058907145 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423200528134 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161705977533 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104639468058 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282706150407 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610156222638 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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