Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Even though each field has its appropriate salary range, there has been a differentiate gap between the amount of money sports professionals earn and that other essential professionals do. As a result, the public has divided into two groups: one significantly approve while the other strongly disagree with it.
In any way can a professional player be paid for no reason. Whenever an athlete wins a competition, he not only achieves fame and career success but pride in his hometown and country as well. For example, Nguyen Thi Anh Vien is a Vietnam's pride, has brought a lot of medals and prizes for Vietnam. Besides, famous skilled players are paid a great deal of money by being traded between clubs and teams, not mention to the profit from commercials, advertisements and souvenirs widely sold in every sports store.
However, the enormous differentiation in salary range between sport and other fields has caused an unsatisfaction among people. Both professional sport players and others have to suffer a lot of challenges and hardworking to achieve their success. Unfortunately, skilled players almost earn many times as much money as others do. When the U23 Vietnam team defeats their opponents in the AFC Cup, they are given such a great deal of money from many supporters and even the Government. On the other hand, scientists and geniuses in other fields, such as education, though having brought quite a lot of awards for their country, didn't give much honour and recognition than they should have been.
Despite the desire to devote themselves to their hometown and country, sports professionals are still able to be given such a lot of earning that it has caused the unsatisfaction between them and others. Everyone deserves to be recognised and honoured for what they have done, so that the Government should notice this problem and bring in policies helping balance and break the gap among professionals' salary range.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82404257024 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2847512972 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216891841756 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783807439252 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038030375835 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125220070357 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045713425207 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.