Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other profession. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think that it is unfair.
Discuss both views and give opinion.
Successful sports celebrities acquire enormous rewards as compare to other fields. Therefore, some individuals believe that earning name and fame, luxurious lifestyle is the essential part of sport professional. However other argue that other important profession are also imperative for human beings. This essay will discuss both views before formulating the opinion.
Perhaps the most valid reason for earning of sports persons is representing the country in games events, which are organised globally. As the all sports individuals participate in sports events and do work hard to acquire adequate position, thus, after successful achievement of reward then it become the honour of particular country. Consequently, the players earn name and fame, financial support and popularity from government. For instance, after wining gold medal in world championship of wrestling the wrestler abc got numbers of rewards and popularity from his country.
On the other hand, opponents who are the favour of other profession equality as sports say that other important fields such as health care, teaching, science and defence are essential for society. Moreover, these fields has significance role to intensify basic infrastructure of human beings, so these professions should have opportunity to explore more economic growth. Additionally, the health care profession is very necessary for mankind; hence, if the more chance will be available in this field then probably the new comers will give prior to choose this type of professions.
To sum up, although, the sports persons are being treated as prior base because their representing of nations in sports events. However, some other fields such as health, science, learning and defence are also essential for human beings. In my views, the chances of acquiring financial aspects should be approachable for all professions because it these are very beneficial for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...uccessful achievement of reward then it become the honour of particular country. Conse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6198630137 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84533400426 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0959644597 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172919241167 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668721410349 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491480911676 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116502017644 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726718274475 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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