Team activities and sole activities performed by people are giving them important skills for life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples
People can involve for life in both ways, by their own and with others. I agree with that statement, we need both ways to challenge ourselves. There is a certain times when we have to find our own way like finding our goals in life. after that we should find individuals who have same goals to support and push each other to the limits.
Firstly, every human being needs to find an activities wich would challenge him. other can share their ideas but at the end you are the one who should know which is apropiete one. there is one sole activities which is wary popular nowadays, meditation. meditation gives us many benefits like better concentration and discipline. our society is really poor in those areas. Socialmedia and work stress are two big factors why people have mental crises. As meditation is really personal and needs commitment, it really helps th deal with those issues. For example,I started meditating 2 years ago. First thing I noticed that my mind did not wondered around as much pluss I learned how much dicipline it needed to meditate every day same time.
On the other hand,if we spend all time in our heads and wont share it with other, it can slow down our involvement. For that reason we should find activities what would involve others. Good example of thet is football. In football most importiant is to have strong teamwork. team is as strong as the weakest link. From teamwork we learn many importiant skill for life, for example trusting others and supporting them. great example is Estonian football team where trust and super strong teamsupport gave a great victory. when they lost ball and all players from other team run to other side to hit the goal, sametime they trusted goal keeper. goal keeper catched the ball and hit it to other side, after that we knowe what happened, they won.
To conclude, why we should challange ourselver individually and with others? it is essential to take time to ourselves and expande our inner skills. On the other hand activities with other will teach us many importiant things what we can not learn by ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74450549451 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41072328667 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0370412582 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.08 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.56 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170596312948 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492791024028 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472156831831 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987067181258 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233039514446 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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