Technology effects our everyday lives. Give examples of how technology helps us and discuss any disadvantages it may bring.
Our day to day existence is heavily influenced by technology. One school of thought completely relies on how easy the things have become, the other mentions all the negative aspect of it. From being easily available, to becoming total haphazard, we’ve seen it all. There is a huge cost that we incur while being addicted to technology.
The most favourable factor that it has given humans is to be able to communicate with our dear ones while we are away from them. Not only does it allow us to talk to them, but we can even drop messages which can be replied as per the wishes of reciever. Yes, phone has definitely made our lives easier, but some of us don’t realize how addictive they’ve become. We are so much inclined towards them that the first thing we see, in the morning after getting up, is our phone. Research shows that the young generation would check their phones ten times in an hour and check for likes on their social media posts. Even in the parties, they’d keep on staring at the mobile, being rude to the other people around them.
Another example can be taken for the transportation. It has helped a lot of people to commute in a matter of minutes. In case someone’s willing to buy something, they’d just get into their fancy cars, drive for two miles, buy the stuff and head back home. This has made humans lathargic and so prone to physical vulnerabilities, that was not quite the case in older times. People used to walk miles and used to have less health issues. Some scientists have come to a conclusion that around 63% of the middle-aged men are obese. Not only that, the infants that are born to them also bear similar characteristics and tend to gain weight quite easily. Although commuting can be a gift of technology, however can have adverse effects on pollution as well.
To conclude, it is important for us to understand what is good and bad for us. Having to rely too much on technology is fine, but are we ready to bear its cost?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6218487395 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59972651273 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6374293305 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898966160317 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026308143133 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284107333734 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590777805864 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303500978591 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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