Nowadays, people have started becoming sick because of issues caused by stress. This essay will discuss the main causes of sickness related to stress including performance pressure among peers and discrimination in the workplace. This essay will also suggest the solutions including improving ways to control the emotions and educating people to deal against discrimination.
Employees these days tend to be competitive among their colleagues to gain new height in their job. Also, some of them become victims of partiality done by their superior. The major reason is that the workers want to reach zenith by attaining timely promotions and maintaining financial stability. Research conducted in 2018 showed that the direct superior of multiple employees favoured the ones with the opposite gender. This leads to unrest amongst other employees and willingness to perform well often causes stress.
However to counter stress, the most important aspect is to learn the art of dealing with emotions. Also, employees should be taught to fight against partiality by raising concerns with the HR department. Tackling emotions can make a person mentally stronger and discussing issues with the HR can cause a serious action against biased managers. Studies show that the employees who' ve been counselled often by various seminars conducted at their workplace have helped them to de-stress. Events like these can certainly reduce the stress levels amongst people.
There is no doubt that there has been an exponential increase in the sickness that stress has caused in today's fast paced world. This essay discussed how stress is often caused due to pressure caused by performance and partiality. This essay also suggested that maintaining emotional stability and knowing your rights can be the solutions to these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who've
...nagers. Studies show that the employees whove been counselled often by various semina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47163120567 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67426909743 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6987316223 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195424894648 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663659399903 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497577223282 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129678211218 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611285669258 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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